मंजर
मंजर ऐसे भी आये है जिन्दगी के सफ़र में,
हम खुद ही नागवार हुए अपनी नजर में.
तुझीसे छुपाऊ, सब तुझीको बताऊ,
कौन है तेरे अलावा मेरा पुरे शहर में.
हम खुद ही नागवार हुए अपनी नजर में.
रिश्ते फना होते है, निशाँ इश्क के नहीं,
तेरा जीकर अब भी आता है मेरे जीकर में.
हम खुद ही नागवार हुए अपनी नजर में.
Continue......
8 comments:
Keep on creating...
God keep showering the great imagination power to you.
hi...im commenting after much time.....anyws..just trying to complete next para......
" mushkile toh bahot aayi zindagi me,
par is mushkil se ladte ladte
hum khud hi nagvar hue apni nazar me"
pls give ur true comment.....waiting for reply.
SHAYAR ho ya KAVI ho ya LEKHAK ho ye sab log puri duniya apni nazarse dekhte hai without thinking for comments.
So if you look this creation by ur own eyes or to that SITUALTIONAL PERSON u will find the MOST TRUE comment.
As a reader : Nice completion!
May God give you those EYES.
Oh Thank you so much... :)
U most welcoome.
I guess u found the true comment.
Yes, in fact most of the time I interpret correct.. :)
thats really amzing :)
but its not good to interprete for comments for ur natural creation.
Right????
Anyways keep on creating the natural Gazals. It relates many lives.
Its my hobby, I cant hold myself for it... :P
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